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Layna's Bike Model, Work in Progress by cg-sammu Layna's Bike Model, Work in Progress by cg-sammu
Here's a block out of Layna's bike she'll be on, its still work in progress, let me know if guys have suggestions =) www.facebook.com/sammustudios
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MaximLardinois Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Cool stuff! The extremely short fork, while not the most actually practical choice, gives the bike a very aggressive, sturdy profile. Maybe add in some exhaust pipes in the back or something on the back of the seat to break the symmetry of the silhouette a little? Just a minor nitpick, too, but the light might not be entirely of use with the wheel right in front of it.  

All in all, it looks really great! It's simple and powerful and reads incredibly well at first glance. 
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
HAhah thanks for the feedback! yeahh I'll definitely move the light up slightly..lol
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KagomeChan23 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
loving the green glow around the wheel! the bike itself looks really dark, not sure if this was your plan or not but with how much metallic armor she's wearing might want to incorporate it somewhere on the bike (not a lot, just touches here and there) so the bike itself stands out more. That or add more glow effects on the bike frame :)
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!! Yeah I think the bike as the same problem from before, I just need to add some of that white metal on there.. But the bike shouldn't be a huge focus though..XD I want it to be pretty mellow
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Lvl99-Gamer Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Great bike! I like how the orange and green from her helmet kind of come back in her bike. Only thing I'm not too fond of is her gun. I can't really see it work and the shape just feels sorta.. ''off'' you know?

Anyways love your updates keep it up!
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks man!! glad you like the bike! :D yeahh I need to make the gun a bit better now, its been the same temp shape for too long ahhahahah XD!!
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nlPosIdon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm with goldfisharmada, a mounting point of some sort would be perfect.
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GoldFishArmada Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
You could have a place for her to mount the firearm for stability.
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hmm, so do you think both her arms should be on the bike then?
I sorta imagined her to be kinda like how Arnold was in Terminator2
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GoldFishArmada Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Well, its your design, but I would find some way to integrate her weapon into the vehicle, maybe a perch kind of like a mobile mg nest, or a slot like how Batman's motorcycle has machine guns on the side.
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ooo!! I like that idea! mini guns on the side or something right?/ :D
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GoldFishArmada Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
That'd be cool, hard to explain, but really cool.
If you really want to emphasis that weapon she has, you could have her put it on the side, and have the bike rigged to fire it when she presses a button or something.
Otherwise, yeah, miniguns or one that makes more sense (though I doubt that matters too much) would be a light or medium machine gun.
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Morec0 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Bicycle!

Bicycle!

Bicycle!

I want to ride my bicycle! I want to ride my bike!
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
HAhaha yessssss!
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Gusindor Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I can't really see anything to improve, assuming fast & powerful was the look you were going for. It's not exactly elegant, but a bike like this doesn't need elegance.
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cg-sammu Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanksss!!! Yeah I wanted to go for the Arnold in Terminator2 look, how hes shooting a shotgun and riding that harley motorbike at the same time =) And also, she's meant to be a tough girl too
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